Author
Kevin Sano (kevinsano)
Date Submitted
06/30/2009 | 09:50AM EST
Category & Size
Illustration | 502 x 810 px
Tags
Current Score
4.16 / 5.00
112 votes | 7,256 views
The People Have Spoken
Average Score: 8.4 / 10
Needs some minor adjustments, and I think the facial expression doesn't accompany the pose very well
someone else already pointed out the 6 toes. :D lol
I am only noticing a few anatomical problems here. The first is that holy crap her right arm is SHORT compared to the left. If her arm was folded up it would be positioned where it is, however you have it extended straight.
Also, her pelvis seems to be...crooked. The lines of her venus mound should be straighter down (they look almost sideways) and also positioned lower. You have the lines starting up on her hips. This is fine for very very skinny girls but on curvier women like this the lines are only on the mound and do not extend towards the stomach much.
Don't get me wrong though, overall this looks great. :D
If you have any other questions feel free to message me. :D
Author's Response:
thanks for that arm thing, I'm completely stumped why I didn't see that one earlier...
I would give it a 10 if she would have had 5 instead of 6 toes, and if she was more anatomicly correct. but otherwise ok :)
Author's Response:
oh crap, I must've submitted the wrong one... I edited that long ago o.o
well no... i think the lack of clothes looks silly... no normal woman would wear that... anway... love the shading and colours on the hair, the line art is yet again wonderfull everything looks in proportion with the angles they are at... love the shading on the skin to give it more depth along with the fade out of her left leg... i would like to see another one of theses but her with detailed clothes on and without the commission writen all over it... i understand its for someone but its just seems a bit pointless submitting it to the portal like that... i hope you understand where im coming from, i really like this anime sort of style you have... keep up the good work...