Very nice...
... I reckon you could get this kind of thing published.
Very nice...
... I reckon you could get this kind of thing published.
Good...
Its pretty good.. but where are you going to post the rest of this short story???
you can try to find it on either hentaifoundry or furaffinity
good beginning
a bit more exposition is needed though.
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