"Talon" Ezra by Kel-chan on Newgrounds

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"Talon" Ezra

This is the character for the upcoming series I'm making. "Talon" Ezra. Her nickname "Talon" is after her spaceship the Talon M-5.

This is the 4th iteration of this character that I went through trying to get it perfect. I used Motoko Kusanagi for the character base design- She has a similar hair style and badass complex

The belt is an engineering belt that produces an antigravity field but only in artificial gravity enviornments like spaceships. So you can't use the anti-grav belt on planets.

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Belthagor

2014-09-21 16:12:20

this is nice, really beautiful, but it looks weird she has dark red hair on a red background, change the background color?

Doomroar

2014-09-20 04:14:11

I can definitively see her mouth, i can also see that she has a bit of a pompadour going on there, i can dig it, Space Dandy is putting it back on the map, so it is cool.

However what is the deal with that big black bar on the right side? it is a column or a wall or... what is that? it is so distracting and completely unnecessary, why is the character not in the center? i actually refreshed the page twice because i thought that it was not loading well.

Kel-chan responds:

It's a scene from the opening - the black bar will have white text on it- and the character will be inked like a manga drawing. I might also put a graphic where the red is but i dunno

beowolf666

2014-09-20 02:02:13

nice but one question... where's her mouth?

Kel-chan responds:

its there but the shading is a big wonky- it happens because there is no edgeline on the mouth- atleast not from this particular angle because of the way it is calculated. If i rotate the camera a lil then it would show. Also the JPEG is compressed which means the pixels get smooshed together- If I uploaded the bitmap at 1920 you'd like the line