00:00
00:00
Newgrounds Background Image Theme

Jibrail just joined the crew!

We need you on the team, too.

Support Newgrounds and get tons of perks for just $2.99!

Create a Free Account and then..

Become a Supporter!

Aries Sky 5-10

Share

I have a couple more pages to load yet but you can only submit 10pgs per day

check out the rest here http://www.inkblazers.com/manga-and-comics/Aries-Sky/detail-page/7194?lang=en

Log in / sign up to vote & review!

Now i see!
That is a hand!
Her hand with the black glove graving the soldiers rifle! to be more exact.

Man what a cryptic last panel, but it is easily solvable if you zoom out the image and let's us see the rest of her arm, and actually use some contrast to make the hand more defined, since as it is now it looks like the shadow of a person doing yoga.

Well nothing more to say here, everything else looks good, minus 2 starts because i can't stand that last panel, but good work overall.

Kel-chan responds:

theres an adittional 4 pages but I can fix that panel and give it more definition

Credits & Info

Artist
Views
707
Score
Waiting for 4 more votes

Uploaded
Sep 16, 2014
9:54 PM EDT
Category
Illustration
Tags

You might also enjoy...

Licensing Terms

You are free to copy, distribute and transmit this work under the following conditions:

Attribution:
You must give credit to the artist.
Noncommercial:
You may not use this work for commercial purposes.