Needs work.

The faces to the left look pretty good, but the girl's body is very poorly drawn. Work a little more on anatomy and three-quarter perspective. The biggest problem I have, by far, is that her legs look deformed and severely broken. The upper half of her torso, though, is solid, but her bikini bra straps look as if they should be bending outward rather than inward.

Otherwise, you do a good job with faces that are facing the viewer, keep it up.