Contrast
There isn't enough contrast in the shading. This leads to the features blurring together but mostly, it just doesn't look alive and realistic enough. Put in a few more splashes of shine and then darken the shadows by a lot. Also, use a wider range of tones as opposed to different shades of the same few colors.
Your direction of light isn't consistent. It isn't coming from the left enough on the rock and her hair doesn't have any direction at all.
There are proportional problems, as well. Her arms are too long and her face looks smaller than it should be. Also, there's something very wrong with the way that her left (from out perspective) leg is angled. It looks like it's broken. The leg is also too long. If you aren't already using a reference, then you should almost always do so.
My last comment is that you have fallen into the trap of the smudge tool. You should never use the smudge tool to shade unless it's something very subtle. Use pallets of color instead.