very nice drawing, with an epic face expression, and a funny situation going on.
i like the shading/lighting effects on this, as well as the really detailed suit/body/face of the woman.

her pose is very natural, and her armour looks great, with nice details.
also the hologram chart with the ''finger'' was really nicely drawn, cool work!

you're good, do more!

I think that the idea behind this is pretty fun. I really like the sketchy feel behind it all.