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789
Score
2.38 / 5.00

Date
11/26/2011
Category
Illustration
File Info
720 x 960 px
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962 kb
Tags
naked
girl
bald
swimming

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Author Comments

practicing blending techniques. not looking for critique on pose/background/lack of hair (though it is welcome for suggestions). couldn't figure out how to make the nipples look more natural, I'm still messing around with that.

feedback, please :D be nice~

Reviews


MUZMUZMUZMUZMUZMUZ

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars Nov 26, 2011

Hmm

Negatory on that good buddy, I just took .34 points away, sorry about that. But I can say, add depth via shadowing on the right breast, and add some more fat on it too, also a pose that isn't so radical would be much more calming to the eye. I think the fact that the hair is missing is unfamiliar to people and causes fear, resulting in 0's. The background is classic trash, nobody likes the blank or meaningless backgrounds man. I'm not joking when I say even some trees or sky would be nice.



Fullmetal-AnimatorFullmetal-Animator

Rated 1 / 5 stars Nov 26, 2011

Sorry.

I'm afraid there isn't a lot I can commend about this. Proportion wise you seem to know what you're doing but there's a lot of isues with width and volume, especially looking at the size of the head in relation to the rest of the body. The muscles in the neck don't seem to click together as they should given the way her head has turned and the limbs have this rubbery look to them. The top of the head could also do with a bit more volume as well.
Keep trying, though. You'll improve the more you practice life drawing and figure studies. :)



VITOVIKVITOVIK

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars Nov 26, 2011

Nice anatomy

nice hands! you drawing hands very well!, the paintig is good.
I dont like so much the lineart.
The yellow ligths look so good too!