Author's Comments
I was commissioned by a friend on WWOEC to make this for him, I liked it so much I decided to post it here when the art forum was formed. I really love this picture, it didn't take too long to make and constructive criticism is always welcome on all of my work!
The People Have Spoken
Average Score: 8.3 / 10
check out some of my stuff .. i would love to know what you think about it ...
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Very nice picture, she is pretty. I wish it was in color. I would like to help you improve upon it though... Her arms are a little skinny... She looks like a nice body, you look up and see the arms and say "Oh shit" Because she must have never lifted weights. But if you like her arms that way, then I appologize. Be breast are a little pointy, which striked me a little awkward because that and the arms are the only flaws... Her face is perfect, I love the expression. But anyway it is a great picture. I hope to see more from you. (I am sorry if I had offended you in any way, but my picture is no better [not to say mine is equal to yours either] so I have no room to talk)
Author's Response:
You do not offend in any way. The arms are skinny now that I look at them and the breast are a little pointy. But I love the facial expression and am glad that you could see past the boobies and p**sy to see the emotion in the face.
How cute! She looks like she could be friends with the character I'm developing! I just need to add a few more picture to get a scout and I would love to show you! I like the very pitet body which let's you get away with those beasts, they seam a bit off though. They legs and skinny arms work though!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I would love to see yours!
although it's only a sketch it shows a style and your knowledge of a female figure. It's a very cute and small piece that does all that it really was intended too, there are errors though. I think the legs are sized a bit off, you may need to consider the angle a bit more when drawing a more complicated pose like this one. the arms are fine from what we can see (which is all we need to see) The waist is also a bit off, maybe a bit more meat, if you know what I mean? The Face is what gets you pretty much all the stars I'm giving it's got a great expression and is just seductively cute... if that's even possible. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!!
sweet. but the boobies could be better.
pretty hot. ecspecially the face.
Author's Response:
Thank you, the face is my favorite part she looks innocent but willing. I am much better with faces than with anything else. I am awful with hands.... thats why you don't see them!
hot hot so HHHHOOOOOOOT!
Author's Response:
THANK YOU!!!! The breasts need work though..... hee hee. Breasts Knead... HA HA!!!
i say this is good and bad at the sametime lol...i mean u do need more work u know...like the body, the breast is not shaped right...there should be a tail to make hanging behind her...the arms....they look like sticks lol...no offence there...and the hour glass figure is way to small...well thats my criticism....lol but as for advice...y not improve your art by using photoshop or other programs that might help u see how good u can get...good luck if your going to make more of "these" kind of art....
Author's Response:
Thank you again for honest criticism, I am always looking for ways to improve and I will take into account eeverything stated above. Thank you! :)
