great art work :)
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Hi everybody!
Well, I have much time, but I could do this character for I want forget how I use the program.
I think that I bad, criticize!
See you later!
Not bad, I'm getting a vague Slayers Vibe from this. Slayers anime that is
Her left leg is has a bulge that shouldn't be there just below the knee. It is like you put the knee sideways but the leg facing forward. Her waist and diaphragm are way to narrow. Next to her left eye, you didn't color in the hair. The curve of her butt doesn't flow into her hips at all properly. The pants are pressed way too far in so it gives the appearance that her legs are dislocated. Her breasts are set too high on her body- the top/connecting part of the breast line flows more into the armpit. There are other minor touches that need to be done, but that is good enough for a start.
jaguare19 responds:
Thank you for the information. Thanks to I you have observed mistakes that it had not seen.
I´m grateful to you very much for the critique.
I´m going to repair the errors.
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