to whoever is like, "Were the hell does the name Jack striden come from" this is him. a comic book superhero I created who works with the newyork city police. deal with it!
Jack: needed a good easy to say and remember american name.
Striden: Origanly was "Strider" cause i like aragorn from Lord of the rings, but then changed it to Striden
for originality
Kakashi sensei!
naw jus playin but the character does remind me of kakashi with the mask, but i agree with the fellow below me. to better understand his emotions you should do something with the face mask. However, should you decide to stick with the face mask your going to have to over exaggerate body language, and have emphasis on his eyes. the eyes are usually what bring a character's personality about. whether they're angry, happy, or sad.
you should read the bottom response i gave to the guy below you, i already stated all that. im really good with expressions and poses. this isnt a problem. just read the bottom response and youll see what im talking about. besides you cant be a super hero if everyone knows your face. when jack is out in normal attire his hair isnt slicked back and hes not wearing his police uniform
Very nice art style!
I like your art style, and the character is very unique. If you plan on making a comic with him, however, you should remove the face mask so people can understand his facial expression.
thanx for the feedback dude. but if you dont mind me correcting you a little, a character doesnt always need to show the mouth to demonstrate expressions. any good artist knows that the eyes and body language can be used to show emotion as well if not more so.
a perfect example of this is Spider man you cant see his face but the way his body is drawn when he is talking or how big the eye parts of his mask get when he's surprised show just enough emotion that the reader can relate to the character.
again im not trying to lecture you i do appreciate you pointing that out. i just wanna let you know that i know what im doing
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