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It's looks like you're aiming for simplicity, but I don't think it has reached a good level of refinement.

This is quite difficult to critique without having a go personally, but I'll give it a try:
- The silhouette is a bit off for me, since I would have expected more length to the body, the horse has a massive rump, and the back legs are angled backwards for some reason.
- Are you trying to describe the shape with interesting lines, yet generating as few areas as possible? If so, I would probably get rid of the ear, and align the rear of the next with the front of the rear leg.

Personally, I would try to generate the shape of the horse as simply as possible, see what lines and areas are generated, then break apart the huge white areas by slighty reangling something, or adding a feature.

I also hate the animal you chose. I don't get what a zebra has to do with white shapes and black stripes.

look now to be honest its not rrl good but well... im not insulting but its just a couple of black and white lines and thats it

J-qb responds:

Don't worry, I'm not easily insulted. The black lines are a figment of your imagination, it's just a bunch of white areas.

Cool design and it's artistic but pretty much it...

J-qb responds:

you mean it's too simplistic for your taste? thanks for the comment.

I like this concept - Honestly i think the only thing holding me back from a 5 is just because of the animal you used. Unfair as that may be - just personal preference. It even reminds me of how i wish to have my business logo designed one day, in a sense.

However how you drew it was amazing, i am very into this piece and in all honestly i hope to see you make more of them. Sleek, Modern(ish) and Elegant. In my mind at the least.

4/5

J-qb responds:

Glad you like it, might make some more of em. I'm thinking of trying out screen printing this on a shirt or something.

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