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Aw jeeeez! You need to colour your work more often! This looks sick!
I love the character's design overall and the personality you show through your concepts. I can almost guess what this character would sound and act like just by looking at him.
Nice touch with the mouth belly too haha
Keep it up!
I'm really bad at coloring stuff, it takes me too long to do it and I end up scrapping a lot of stuff cause it doesn't look quite right. I'm really glad that someone seems to like it, means a lot. :)
This picture has quite good face style.
But i don't like that picture misses more values of shadows and light. I.e this deamon has only 2 values of red colors (i don't count some pink on it's hand).
Still draw and improve your skills. I recommend you to redraw from life or at least photoes focusing on shadows falling.
I appreciate you taking the time to criticize my work, I can see where you're coming from but I personally felt no need to go into detailed shading for this specific image. I have other images I drew a while ago where I did go into more detail, I know how to do it, I just didn't feel the need for it this time.
Thank you for the review.
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