A Jump Into the Ocean by InsertFunnyUserName on Newgrounds

A Jump Into the Ocean

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Artist InsertFunnyUserName
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Views: 2,362
Score: 3.58 / 5.00

Date: 08/11/2009
Category: Illustration
File Info: 600 x 600 px; JPEG; 216.3 kb
Tags: ocean

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Author Comments

I feel like there's something missing from this, but I don't know what it is. This has taken me a long ass time and I still don't think it's right.

Constructive criticism will be much appreciated.

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BlackUniGryphon

Rated 5 / 5 stars Oct 7, 2009

PURPLE!!!!!

Yes! Purple is awesome! and awesome because it's purple!

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Brass

Rated 5 / 5 stars Sep 5, 2009

Very nice

I think it's complete.

Everything is very well defined. Colors couldn't have been selected more fittingly to be honest. Shading is also done quite well.

The anatomy is nearly perfect, but the arms bugged me a bit for some reason. Oh well.

I love the background as well.

5/5, 10/10, my seal of approval and confirmation it's better than my art.

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mrsico

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars Aug 27, 2009

Awesome!

I think you need to edit the arm! It is tugging at my mind. I don't know what's wrong with it. But all-in-all, awesome! Much better than anything I could draw.

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I can see what you mean by something is missing, but I'm slightly torn. I agree with what you say, and you could add something to the background, but at the same time, I like the simplistic background, and adding something would ruin that.

The only reason you lose marks is for the hair. I don't like the way it completely covers the face and it goes in a different direction to what you would think. I think that if you were to fix that it may add that little something you're looking for.

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InsertFunnyUserName responds:

Yeah, the hair has been irking me ever since I drew it, but I don't know how to fix it without completely redrawing the head and the hair.