Date Submitted

08/11/2009 | 02:21PM EST

Category & Size

Illustration | 600 x 600 px

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ocean

Current Score

3.48 / 5.00

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A Jump Into the Ocean

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Author's Comments

I feel like there's something missing from this, but I don't know what it is. This has taken me a long ass time and I still don't think it's right.

Constructive criticism will be much appreciated.

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Average Score: 9.2 / 10

Score: 10
BlackUniGryphon

"PURPLE!!!!!"

date: October 7, 2009

Yes! Purple is awesome! and awesome because it's purple!

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Score: 10
Brass

"Very nice"

by: Brass
date: September 5, 2009

I think it's complete.

Everything is very well defined. Colors couldn't have been selected more fittingly to be honest. Shading is also done quite well.

The anatomy is nearly perfect, but the arms bugged me a bit for some reason. Oh well.

I love the background as well.

5/5, 10/10, my seal of approval and confirmation it's better than my art.

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Score: 9
mrsico

"Awesome!"

by: mrsico
date: August 27, 2009

I think you need to edit the arm! It is tugging at my mind. I don't know what's wrong with it. But all-in-all, awesome! Much better than anything I could draw.

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Score: 9
SeaBoundRhino

"Awesome."

date: August 13, 2009

I can see what you mean by something is missing, but I'm slightly torn. I agree with what you say, and you could add something to the background, but at the same time, I like the simplistic background, and adding something would ruin that.

The only reason you lose marks is for the hair. I don't like the way it completely covers the face and it goes in a different direction to what you would think. I think that if you were to fix that it may add that little something you're looking for.

August 19, 2009

Author's Response:

Yeah, the hair has been irking me ever since I drew it, but I don't know how to fix it without completely redrawing the head and the hair.

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Score: 8
7901

"The leg...?"

by: 7901
date: August 11, 2009

It's great, but the right leg, It's bent in a funny way...

August 11, 2009

Author's Response:

I assume you mean the leg on our right and not the character's right.

Yeah, I see what you mean.

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Score: 9
ghostxero

"i like it"

date: August 11, 2009

i mean since u think something is missing.... u could add a small world in a corner or maybe draw him way at the bottom sleep in a bed so its like hes floating away in a dream, again i like it the way it is.....

August 11, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks. But, no, that's not what I mean. I mean that I feel that something needs to be tweaked somehow, but I don't know what.

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