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4.26 / 5.00

Date
01/17/2014
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practicing anatomy and light :)

if you don't like something feel free to criticize and share your opinion about it because that's the only way that I can improve my skill. thanks :D

sorry if it sucks XD

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idreamtanangelidreamtanangel

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars Jan 25, 2014

I don't know why everyone is complaining. I've seen plenty of chicks who have hips and thighs that are unbelievably thick. So much so that it's unattractive. But they do exist. Therefore, I don't think this is an exaggeration. lol. It's actually pretty sexy. I dislike when boobs are exaggerated, which happens a lot on this site. But I do like the fluid eerie feel of the environment. Her eyes might go a bit better, seeing as you went with the more realistic feel for the rest of the body. Maybe make them smaller. But good job overall. :)


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kmaukmau

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars Jan 17, 2014

The proportions of this character aren't balanced very well. Her upper half is kept in realistic proportions while her legs/hips are incredibly exaggerated, making her look less human as a result.
I know from your other works that you generally like to exaggerate the pelvis area (so do I) but I recommend studying and drawing realistic proportions some more before you continue to do so. Getting a grip on realistic anatomy helps with exaggeration too and will aid you in keeping even exaggerated bodies believable.
Breasts physics could use some study, but I'm not an expert in this field.
Her neck area looks a little caved-in because of the shading.

Attend life drawing courses or look at stock/nude photography on the internet, it'll help you greatly especially with things like the shading in the neck area when both arms are lifted up.


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immaboreddude responds:

Thanks for the advice it really help me. now I now what I need to work the most.
gonna try using references for my next works. :)


mait192mait192

Rated 4 / 5 stars Jan 17, 2014

This is actually quite nice, the tummy and overall the lower area looks odd, but I can't point out what it is... sry. Maybe try to not make specific lines and try to use more shading on surface?


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immaboreddude responds:

I had the same thought


beerbirdbeerbird

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars Jan 17, 2014

The lighting looks pretty good but maybe you should try to look at more bodies of the type you wanna draw before drawing.


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immaboreddude responds:

I tried to draw her without using any reference, that's way i wasn't too sure of what I was doing XD