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4.21 / 5.00

Nov 2, 2012 | 9:13 AM EDT
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Rated 2 / 5 stars

something i know that monsterparty didn't mention about the stomack, it should be a liitle longer and less defined as far as the abs are concerned... in my opinion.... if you want good consistent looking legs, keep them body length. it'll balance things out instead of making them look monstrously bigger than the rest. try to better one thing at a time and maybe be more demanding with yourself if you really want to impress people?

Spedmallet responds:

sto mack


Rated 3 / 5 stars

I think the from hips up it looks pretty good. Her face especially is very nice.
The hands could use some work though and her chest looks a little high up to me.
The legs are the biggest issue. As of now, her knees are larger than her thighs, and it looks unnatural. Her ankles are also a little wide.
Good start though. You have a lot of potential.

Spedmallet responds:

Thanks for the critique; my scribble is complete horseshit compared to your work.

Completely agree about the chest; the stomach is way off.

Overall I need to push myself with hands/limbs; every time I sit down and draw a character I draw the head and body and forget about the rest for a few days before I begrudgingly and reluctantly force myself to finish.

But yeah, thanks for taking the time to review