Fantastic
Some fantastic character designs you have here maybe adding even more shades would be nice, This is a nice entry here, it has all the makings of a brilliant piece your lines and detail even in its black and white form make it jump out at you, the smooth line detail the design of it all it has lots of flavor and vibe and thats what really jumped out at me on this one.
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maybe adding even more shades would be nice
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