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my seconds gimp drawing....open to constructive criticism also tips on how to color and so forth. i only have a laptop mouse to work with so if you know any tricks to make the lines come out better then let me know.

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Cute

This was a cute piece the "EYES" are really popping out here I think you should have gone with a darker backround so that the character dont just mesh with it, but anyways really good character here and its a cute and adorble one, you have some nice linework here on this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you should have gone with a darker backround so that the character dont just mesh with it

~X~

This is one funky bird. It looks like that left eye is just about to pop out. Great work on lining and shading, but it seems the character isn't that perfectly cut out, some white blotches still remain on the tail fathers, etc. Also, a bit fuzzy background. Keep it going!

-cd-

HiZtory responds:

thanks man ill keep at it

Lol, that's funny. Is a nice job for a second drawing(at least for me of course).
I just think you should put some shadow on the branch, and take care of some white contours, as in paw of the bird (that... thing... it's a bird, is not it? lol XD)

HiZtory responds:

its a bird thing because he's a jelly bean too lol!

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