Very nice painting

This was a nice painting I thaught some coffee in the mug would have been a nice touch, A domestic feel is present in the "PAINTING-BASED" on the physical objects there a mug a tablecloth and an apple in a clear plate Presumably the setting was that of a kitchen table, The shadows and angle of an indirect yet natural light source also serve for what could be a window situated "OVER-THE-TABLE" The edges of every object is soft as are the colors, The objects are also three-dimensional giving them definite "VOLUME" and a realistic look.

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I thaught some coffee in the mug would have been a nice touch

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5 im sorry but it anit that great

there are so many problens first of all the shadow of the bowl is sqyare and that made it 10-2 then it was the shadow of the table made it go 2 more down 8-2
6 and last of all the apple is really close to the end of the bowl but theres no shadow since its a small item i made it 6-1 5 thats how i came up with 5 you need to work on your shadows but other then that it was very good and there are so many things good with this peice of work and all i can say is next time be a bit more specific with your shadows but i bet it was the longest revw you've had because im the first to write on two more pages your pretty famous on newsground and your progress so far and im proud of you but all i can say is that you need to work on your shadows even tho i have like another 3,318 letters remaining so i cant talk alot but i spent quite alot of words on this like 5 minites im loseing lots of time so far im trying to do 1000 letters on this lol thats why im writeing but really i love the reflection on the apple i love the shineing bit and alll more i can say is i spend 1000 words on writeing this

Nice ^^

had to look some time at the bowl to see that shade uner it :P
but, NICE O_O