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Re-do of a character.
Critiques would be helpful~
AH!!oh man she scared me.oh no not the voices.
Slut Mc Slutty slut!!!!
hair color should be purple
No it shouldn't.
the belt really stands out to much and something about the eyes just look wrong good try tho
Please try and identify the problem to give a more helpful critique next time.
Ok... Top to bottom, let's review:
Hair: Phenomenal. Love the color, the tails, the shagginess.
Face: Good enough. The eyebrows and lips don't exactly match the wink. The face should scrunch a bit along with the eye. The blush work is good, along with the open eye's color and gleam.
Neck: Love the choker. Length of the neck is good to her height.
Shoulders are great! A little elaboration is there, but still bare.
Outfit: I like the sleeves a whole lot, but I'm not sure about the shape beneath the sheer. The waist looks like it is cinched by a corset, but the belt looks a little more loose fitting and it is definitely not capable of shaping the whole tummy.
Belt: I'm not sure how the purple on the belt works. It looks like it is supposed to be part of the outfit, but it is off center with the outfit.
Altogether: Pretty good. Not quite perfect, but definitely a good piece of anime art, which I'm usually not fond of. :)
Thank you for the critique.
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