very nice but sad :((((
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So i launched my new website, set up a facebook fan page, and all that good stuff in the hope of generating interest in my work again, and up until now, aside from some nice comments, not much has happened. Im sure allot of people have felt a little down as i do now, and as is reflected in this comic.
Needs more
~~REVIEW~~
ok now here is something its not very much there, so not much to coment on but what there is, its cute, i do however like the "FRESH" colors and look you like whith the characters color, and such, the backrounds seem to be very bland, and there was just not enough frames, i do like the borders that were in this, now you can improve on this add some color to the frame, a bright standout color would be a nice addition, and then add something to the backrounds, aslo with the one where there is like fireworks and such you should make that more "IN YOUR FACE" so its more like a suprise, but anyways hope this review and a few of the ideas can help to improve on what you were trying to present us with, anyways good luck on your next entries
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs more color like in the borders, and more content in the backrounds, also more jumping out effects
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