I like her. But... her left shoulder joint looks a bit longer than it should and I'm not entirely sold on her face either, though I understand that could be stylistic choice. I like her pose, she's showing off her form well without going into the "boobs & butt" pose that so many comic artist use (with no regard as to how the human spine works).
Also I love Vampire the Masquerade... though I haven't done anything with it since White Wolf changed the clans all around, Tremer are one of my favorites.