The pyrotechnic effects and lighting are the best parts of this piece- dynamic, very present and powerful. There is a certain fire in the cast's eyes that reflects her use of fire that's very appreciable. The detailing could use some improvement, but you did a good job.

You should absolutely be proud of this. Its clear that you really challenged yourself and tried a variety of techniques, you chose a challenging pose and effects, and while there is a lot that could be better, there's a lot more you should be happy about and rather than telling you what could be better, I'd rather tell you to keep it up! Keep challenging yourself and you'll improve out of sight. Great work. Keep it up and thanks for sharing!