Crit
I really love the actual painting style you used for the figure as well as the color choice, but there's a few things about her proportions that seem a bit off. For example the way her chest is positioned, it looks like the top is suppose to be facing the viewer while the rest of her body is showing three quarts, therefore making the left side appear a lot smaller compared to the right lol
Also I would make her head a bit larger and her left arm a bit longer, otherwise it's very nice for 5 hours :3