She needs jump in that shower, cuz that's a bad case of bed head! lol

its whatever i like the idea though.oh and before i forget this is sapossed to be a shcool add wow idc what grade it is unless its collage but a shcool add really

I would suck all over her titties and nipples!

Actually

Looks feminine to me, three things that I don't like are the ear, which seems very small and high up, the way the face is structured through the shading as in it's just not appealing, and the lack of emotion on the face/how the lips are pursed but that is a choice too I suppose.

As far as the style, if you are working in a style inspired by Mucha the linework is a bit too thick around the body, and from the like two things I remember seeing from him which were towards the end of his career, he tended to line in the colors of the fabrics and such with a lot of detail on the face and neck with varying degrees throughout and I think he did a bit more with facial expressions and body language.

Though in general I think you're amazing, this is probably not my favorite but I do see Mucha's style in it so you succeed there, the other reviews are pretty dumb so there's also that

transvesti

shoulders need to be drasticaly reduced, eyebrows need to be thinner, breasts to be raised, the neck to be thinner, thicker eyelashes, and facial features to be smoother

the coloring is cool though