Anatomy Class?

Besides the obvious clash in art style (realistic for the body, manga for the head which does not work at all), there's some major anatomy problems here. The belly button is way too high up her stomach, her arms appear weirdly drawn (her left arm is crooked in a weird unnatural manner which may be because her elbow is too high up and her right armpit seems to begin about midway at her breast) and her neck looks like it belongs to a man.

Her bra seems oddly drawn, with the bottom of her breast for some reason escaping from the bra (which begs the question, do you know bras work?) with no straps on the side. The angles on the panties are also unrealistically horrible. I really recommend you to take an anatomy class because everything is so twisted. The background somewhat works but feels a bit too simplistic. The colours also make it look like the plants are wilting.

It's not a horrible piece by any means, there are some things that do work, but there's also just so much that could be improved.

Eh...

This isn't bad, by any means, but I don't think it's terribly amazing.

It looks like you put almost no effort into her head, face, and hair. And, as rude as this is going to sound, it almost looks like you traced the body off a photo and then coloured it and added in your own head, it doesn't flow nicely, even the position of the neck seems off. I'm sorry if this sound really rude, but that is what it seems like to me.

Also . . . How is her tiny shirt staying on? there are no straps on the sides, so there is no way it would just fit and stay perfectly like that. Her top in and of itself is oddly shapoed and conforms perfectly to the shap of her breasts.

I think you should work a little more on making sure things flow nicel and work together., by the way, the background is very nice.

Awesome.

Really hot! Good job.

therealshadman

therealshadman is saying the picture needs to be rated A instead of E.....

Wow :o

HOTNESS!! :P