A scene with a character from a manga idea I have. The unfortunate victim as well as the two onlooking thugs are on the same team just so you know. Please review/critique!
It's awesome
The perspective problem is the guy getting kicked in the face. He should be a lot smaller and look like he's floating in the air. That's all. You're drawings are very good. Just watch your positons and perspectives.
And your coloring is top notch.
I see what you mean. Its tough too keep everything like that in mind with such a busy picture but I'll fix that problem in the future.
nice work..
i've seen some of the other crappier works get higher scores because of nudity. Though it may have been extremely dis-proportioned and have a messed up face, as long as there's tits and ass. i like this piece because of the amount of detail in the background. Many people think the the center piece is the most important, but i think differently. kinda like playing a game, although you're supposed to keep your character from dying, you can't help but notice the background art.
um.. thanks? : )
Sorry but this peice needs work
I agree with knuxrouge, you have serious issues with proportions. The bg's are not bad, they are actually really good, so is the shading and overall rendering.
All in all it is a good drawing for someone who is just starting out, but you do have alot of work to do. Not saying this to destroy you, or diss you just calling it like I see it.
perhaps you mean perspective. I see that this picture has a lot of perspective problems, not proportion. I don't know if this work really deserves the second lowest possible score, but i appreciate your honesty. I would really appreciate if you view my upcoming works with backgrounds and critiquing them as well so I can get better. You are right that I am starting out on backgrounds, as this is pretty clear in the elementary way my perspective is rendered. I will hopefully submit some future content that even you wont have a problem with!!! Thanks again, and don't give 1's to art that clearly doesn't deserve them!!! ; )
Neat!
I really like your shading. It does seem to capture the proper manga feel.
Your background is nice as well, did you draw that out too? I suppose the only issue I have is the footing. The thug on the right (lets call him thug2) is the same height and size as the thug on the left (thug1), but judging by their foot position, thug2 is closer to the action than thug1, yet he looks no bigger in terms of relative distance. Perhaps if his image was bigger to properly portray that he's closer, or move him up a little to put him on even ground with thug1.
I'm assuming your protagonist(?) is airborne, so his hand at the bottom is acceptable. Otherwise there'd be the same issues.
Very nice work.
hey thanks for the review. I see what you are saying. I tried my best to get the perspective right, but I did mess up there.
oh snap
jeez you got skill you make my comic pages look like amatures work( not all of them though) keep THIS UP .
lol thank you. I do love your comic pages too.
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