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4.04 / 5.00

Date
04/21/2011
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Illustration
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1000 x 1388 px
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anime
lesbian
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Kate-chan has feelings for Courtney-chan. This is a parody of this: http://www.newgrounds.com /bbs/topic/1243546/1

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HOLIMOUNTHOLIMOUNT

Rated 5 / 5 stars May 26, 2011

i first was like serious but then i lold

hahaha good one on the hell no thing ithougth this was gonna be one of those love doll manga things hahah make more funny like this



KinseiKinsei

Rated 5 / 5 stars Apr 23, 2011

This Will Be Good

Bravo my good man. Superb.
It's always funny when a piece of Fanart out does the original that it is based on, although the bar was already set pretty low in the first place.

The art is solid, same with the shading. But I expect that from you. Got good pacing and having the frames slightly out of line is a nice way to give this both a good solid professional feel, while keeping it natural.

you have done well with the expressions and the close up shots really get you personal with the characters. Down side of this is it is hard to get a sense of placement or settings. Although at this point I am quite literally digging for things that are wrong with this. I mean it is so awesome in both execution and purpose, that there is little to actually go against.

So very nice Fifty, you have earned my 10 and 5


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Fifty-50 responds:

Thanks man. Although I just made this for laughs, it's quite an honor to receive a 10 from you Kinsei.


GameMasterShaniaGameMasterShania

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars Apr 23, 2011

A fan-art/parody?

Since now I know you MEAN for this to be a parody of Incomplete, I'll give you an honest review.

In the bottom-left corner, Courtney-chan's right iris (on our left) is slightly lopsided compared to the other.

In that final panel, Courtney-chan's hand looks strage... I don't know what makes it seem that way, though.

In the first panel, her ear is very squared. Not that I'm any better at drawing ears, it would help to practice a bit.

Now I want to say I like the style; with the big, shiny eyes, and tiny mouthes. And in the first panel, the way her hair shadows her eyes is so cute.


Fifty-50 responds:

Thanks for the critique mate! I'll try to improve on that. So I can really publish it someday and become famous. And no my characters aren't 10 (creepy) nor Catholic. And Courtney-chan is the only lesbian here lol


BlackStarZ117BlackStarZ117

Rated 5 / 5 stars Apr 23, 2011

Cant wait for the next instalment!

I loved it, that akward question and shes all like "HELL NO!" Bwahahahha, I also loved that forever alone face on the bottom right there


Fifty-50 responds:

Hot Lesbian Action


myheadmyhead

Rated 2 / 5 stars Apr 21, 2011

i dot wana watch to girls get it on

i think not good sir. i am a guy but lesbian action a resent. n no im not gay im straight :3


Fifty-50 responds:

Lol suit yourself.