this is truly some astonishing work, so detailed, so flowing and it still has this essence to it, your work reminds me off a cross between Alex Ross and Tony Wong. All around wonderful stuff

This is really drawn out well. I can see that it's ice blasting out, ice can be hard to draw out when your trying to make it not look like a crystal. But I'm not 100% about the pacing of time on the 2nd page. I'll just say what I might able to tell.

(1st panel is ice shards falling down in front of the hero/swordsman ,again for the 2nd panel, step forward for the 3rd panel and pause for the 4th panel.)

Not sure if I got that right, but it feels like a really slow passage of time right there. But if you are going for it I'm sure you will make it have a good purpose. Not saying everything has to be fast paced just that when time slows down like that it makes me feel like something major is going to happen.

But well drawn out and can't wait to see more!

I really like the texture of the clothes and the rocks or crystals, I'm not sure what they are, but they look more like crystals, or just really sharp looking shiny rocks haha but It's really good :D