Rushed style

The first thing that jumps out at me is the rushed quality of this submission. I didn't like the various lines all over the place, like you decided to quit and submit it anyway. I know it's a work in progress, but it's treated like the final thing because you submitted like a final piece of work. I did like the way you made the face of the fox human, the eyes compliment the skin tone of the character perfectly, but again the rushed quality seems to take away from the overall submission.