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3,800
Score
3.86 / 5.00

Date
05/27/2012
Category
Illustration
File Info
2000 x 1420 px
JPG
1.8 mb
Tags
sky
clouds
wings

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Author Comments

Just really wanted to paint some clouds after looking at the sky today.

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VaguelyCreepyVaguelyCreepy

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 28, 2012

Tom Petty, anyone?

Overall I like it, but I think you should do... something to the clouds. I'm not sure why, but they don't really ring true.

Actually, if that's not the case, which it very well may not be, then the issue might be the composition - it's very centered and symmetrical, kind of static. More like the figure is suspended instead of falling.


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Drikrystal responds:

I knew I wasn't the only one who thought the clouds looked off. Thought the same about the gesture of the person as well. I think I was going for more a reaching/diving look, but never drew in another person for it to be reaching for.
I'll definitely try something more next time. Thank you. c: