Awesome

Very nice dark picture this is one that you can really use the lighting effects to take place and you have lots of lighting points such as the ground the backround the eyes lightning etc so you should give those points more glow more shine more effect comming off of them

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effect focus points could be worked on

~X~

Those eyes in the background look a bit like specks floating in the air, without even facial contours illuminated by their retina glow, but the main character... awesome! You really build-up that energy nicely, and the setting's wet and somber. Heavy rain.

-cd-