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Paper Doll

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I dunno, is undies Mild Nudity?

Anyways. It's a Paper Doll that I am pretty sure I will never finish - No clothes. Ha ha. So tell me- Did I ruin it with the eyes (Again) ? I love the belly. And she was made out of this air, no reference. Different for me... AND YES. I KNOW SHE HAS THE LONGEST ARMS IN THE WORLD. AND I LIKE IT. Ha ha.

Let's call her Weiv.

And I would love comments and critiques. Please tell me why you dislike or like it.
Water Color.

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Sweet

I like this paper doll, she is so lanky, not slim. She doesn't look like run-of-the-mill, which makes her even prettier.
Beside the curls I really fancy the rose spots in the crooks of her arms and on her knees, they remind me of Egon Schiele.
And I think her hands look awesome! In my opinion hands are so difficult to draw and her fingers look normal, not like claws or chopsticks or sausages.
As Killa142 said, I think that less make-up would be better. Maybe you could colour her cheeks with the same colour as the pink spots. I think it is a lively colour.
Her feet are drawn perfectly!, but they kinda seem a little bit too small.
However, a very sweet doll.
By the way, I like her eyes. They look somehow crazy but I think that fits to the rest of the doll's appearance: unusual, yet attractive!

dreamzmighty responds:

Haha. I think they're so many things wrong with this. I didn't work from reference. That's why I gave up on cartoons a LONG time ago. I'm just never really good at them. I try, and I fail. Thank you though, I'm glad you could find good things out of crap. (: I value your opinions!

O.K

Give it some work, less make up

its ok

ive seen better but good job

dreamzmighty responds:

I've seen better too. ):

Potential.

I like the overall style of the art, the dots and lines linework gives to it a nice oldschool kids book feel to it.
the anatomy looks acceptable, but the red spots on the arms are strange, like the elbow is twisted. I'm not too sure about the pose too... While I don't fully get the concept of a paper doll. I think a more dynamic pose could help this drawing.

The pose as it is looks too "Posed" for a drawing, but at the same time, the legs are too close making it hard to cut and make a doll out of it.

Anyway, I like this style.
Keep pushing :D

dreamzmighty responds:

Thank you. I confess, I'm absolutely terrible ( At anatomy and objects ) when I don't use references. I use a reference for pretty much everything I do. And this is a product of me not using anything. It was my curiosity if my cartoons were as terrible as they used to be.

Though yes, the pose is very... boring. It IS a paper doll. the legs do leave a gaping whole, but I never intended to fully cut her out. And the red blotches are pretty much creases for her arms. Though I guess it doesn't look that way, does it?

This was very poorly done by me. It was more a test than anything. And everything you brought to my attention is perfect. I'm glad you were able to find so much for me to work on. Thank you. (:

haha cool

very unique concept. there should be a lot more stuff like THIS on newgrounds.

dreamzmighty responds:

What do you mean like this? Boobies?

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