This is kool because yes there is a lot going on...but theres also too much going on at the same time....my eyes are all over the page. I would suggest to study atmospheric perspective and composition....you have objects in the background that are overly rendered (The SKY for example)....when objects are far away they lose details. and also get lighter in value...things in the foreground are typically darker. Since everything is over the top in detail you no longer have a focal point. If your interested I have some tutorials..that will give you somewhat of an idea...of what i'm talking about...