Author
dommi-fresh
Date Submitted
10/05/2009 | 06:05PM EST
Category & Size
Illustration | 837 x 1512 px
Tags
dommi | sketch | trade | jouste
Current Score
3.93 / 5.00
27 votes | 1,562 views
Author's Comments
this is part of the sketch trade that me and the awesome jouste did together!
i did his character from the lazarus legion!
(http://www.newgrounds.co m/art/view/jouste/the-laz arus-legion)
and he did my character from the extreme hunters club!
(http://www.newgrounds.co m/art/view/dommi-fresh/da ngerous-jim-bio)
i have already seen jouste's version of my work and i have to say i am so so so so pleased with what he did!
what a talented guy!
The People Have Spoken
Average Score: 10.0 / 10
Annada version of the lazarus region! SWEET!
Author's Response:
glad you like it buddy
an excellent representation on the lazarus leigon!
when you asked to do this one specificlaly i was pretty excited because he wasn't a very big hit in some of my peer-circles. you made him look all stoic and mean. shadman was right in saying you made your version a lot more mean looking than mine, very cool direction.
now this is a review so i'll drop some crit:
your ideas are really good but you may need to loosen up your characters ridged and stiff posing if you want to get more energy out of them. i know here you're drawing a very stiff old man in a constrictive suite but i'm more mentioning this as a blanket statement on a lot of your art.
your colors are very very bold and they cut super deep on the page and you lose a lot of your line work and detail. this is great if that's the style you're going for but some line variation might be interesting to play around with.
enough of my blabbering, great job! lets do it again soon!
-jouste
Author's Response:
i agree about the poses actually i need to loosen the characters up. but the style that i use is suposed to be bold and unfortunatley yes it does mean i loose alot of the line work and detail but that is just a sacrafice i am willing to make.
thanks for the advice jouste i will keep in touch!
You made him look evil :D on joustes version he looked cinda friendly! Great job, Its cool how you stay true to tradtitional drawing!
Author's Response:
thanks man i appreciate it.
although i cannot beat joustes original.