Oh wow

Wow now this was cool you could put the whole story together on one piece the art is really nice i love the idea here really hope to see more

~X~

I like the square heads of the characters; it reminds me of something (possibly Legos. I can't remember). It's interesting that this can both be seen as figurative (with the title calling it an unfinished story and the fact that parts of the drawing are still in sketch form) or as an actual artist who did not wish to finish the drawing for reasons unknown (though your comments kind of get rid of this possibility). What keeps striking me as awesome is the head of the guy; a lot of detail went into it, the hair, and the emotion in his face with him trying to hold it together as he's falling apart on the inside. I suppose the only draw backs I see are that the guy's head is bigger than the girl's and that it appears TOO finished or doesn't appear unfinished enough in some respects, such as the fact that the girl's hand isn't drawn near the edge of the screen (good), but her leg which is near the edge as well, is done except for the foot (kind of bad).

Then again, I may not be the best art critics to ask for advice.

Like the way this is coming along, dude. Good pose, showing emotion and interesting render

cheer up, even if love not always has a happy ending. dont give up. everyone is meant to be with someone. just wish and believe it , show how much you want it. and when you least expect it. it will come true. i know how a broken heart feels, but sometimes world is not fair. thought even if hurts. sometimes there is hope. just say how you feel from the heart, think what was the reason why it became this way. if you still love her. i sure you do. both of you just listen to each other. the bad and the good. all these challenges are there just to test you. and your love. i dont know what happened between you two. but love does not die so easily. even if she pretend that she doesn't like you anymore. it could be a disguise to hide her pain. because girls are not always honest how they feel.

He's not anonymous if you know who it is. :P Seems like the story of... unrequited love? Interesting style of drwing in this, how a part of the painting is a sketch; part of it filled in. The outlines on the sketchy parts make it all the clearer that it's supposed to be that way, that they aren't intentionally lefty out, and it feels symbolic of how the relationship is still building, or how the characters aren't complete without each other, or maybe it means that they are 'sketchy' characters. :P The tape and the tear seems like a pretty clear divide, a gap between the characters, but also seems to say that it's an intentional break-up, that someone ripped the picture, so either one is breaking up or one feels broken; is giving up. Yet if you go by the emotional display, it seems like the one walking away is angry, and the one chasing is melancholy, and rather than a photo of a couple, it's a -photo- of a chase, so the gap becomes more symbolic than something material - that the characters would do.

Well, I'm probably overthinking all the details here, but it gives a lot to think about! I like the sketchy style, and the clarity of the scene, and the symbolism, feels like a lot of detail to enforce the scenario. Nice work; sorry about the heartbreak man. :/

-cd-