Beautiful

This was a beautiful piece love everything about this and honestly I didn't see anything that really needs fixing or changing as this was well done not perfect but almost there but it was very good charchter design

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Well done no changes needed

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peek-a-boo!!! amm i mean coOl ;]

Title sums it all up pretty accurately!Good-looking, strong-willed, with a pretty styleful orange umbrella held high as if more a background decoration than to actually shield her from the rain - similar to the cup of coffee, drunk outside in a warming sun falling through a heavy squall. I like the scene, as appropriately out of place as ever but confident, and classy. Nice piece.

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I think this drawing is pretty good. I like how the umbrella gradually fades into the background, it lets my attention go to the woman's face and body, which I thought was a nice touch.

My problem with this drawing though is her expression. She doesn't look angry at all. As the guy below me said, she looks more serious or neutral than anything else. A classic angry face has the eyebrows pointed down and in towards the nose, somewhat narrowed eyes, flared nostrils, and a frown. Not all of this needs to be drawn in perfect detail, but adding these elements in your own style would make the face more angry-looking.

If you're worried that doing this will detract from her cuteness, FEAR NOT! There is a solution! Instead of "angry," you could go for "pouty." A pout is simpler. Just stick out the lips a little and point the eyebrows down and in towards the nose slightly. Pouts are good because not only do they express petulant annoyance, they also double as being seductive if you soften the eyes and brows.

Anyway, it's up to you if you want to do any of that. I do like a lot of your stuff and I can recognize that you are very talented. I hope everything I wrote down was helpful. Looking forward to your future submissions!

So cute <3

She does look more serious than angry, though.