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In the summer:Meeting stranger

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In the summer:Meeting stranger

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745
Score
4.00 / 5.00

Date
06/17/2013
Category
Illustration
File Info
1800 x 1200 px
JPG
825.7 kb
Tags
phone
beach
bikini
sweat

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Author Comments

Here is Kayla and Janeane waiting for sum Old me- i mean guys at the beach. 'parently kayla can't handle the heat and should get an ice pack

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Turnipman274Turnipman274

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars Aug 30, 2013

Kayla's chest looks kinda misshapen and the perspective on the girls seems incongruous.Other than that,it's pretty good and you seem to be better with color than anything.Work on your shapes,and try to add a little more detail to your pictures.I'm sure they'd look great if you took a bit more time to add little details,like the sweat on Janeane.Apply those subtle touches to things like the beach towels and the back ground and you can only do well.Oh,and more texture on things like the sand would help a lot.All in all,work on detail,texture and shape and keep up the good work with your color and lines. :)


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