in my personal opinion its really cool how you made that draw, also, i would like to see that game

Very Creative

I don't know why you were given zeros on this piece. A zero says to me that you didn't put any effort into your drawing, but I think that's quite the opposite. The character has a really dynamic movement, is fully colored, and I believe is of your original design.
Nothing is WRONG with this piece persay, if anything your art still has room to grow.
And no one deserves a zero for that.

Well

Not trying to be harsh but it looks like this took you a few minutes, that's why it's getting zeros, but it doesn't deserve a total zero, but it doesn't deserve to high.
The shading doesn't go very naturally it's just kinda outlining one side, the hands especially the one behind him should have more shading on the side facing us. The major problem and I see this a lot, is the hair and the hat, the hat past the line in the middle, to the left of that line, should be completely shaded, not like the first half, it looks more like a door than a hat. the hair has the opposite problem, the hair has almost no shading in the back.
4/10
2/5