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The head.

The head ruined everything, without it, it looks alright. Also, her hips are a little wide and they dont seem to get any smaller like they should.

adorable

The glowing feathers are a really nice touch although unless they come from a bird shouldn't the source of their glow reflect off her necklace,flower, and earrings? I nvr really liked the anime eye through hair style particularly with this piece as her hair is just painted peaks and not very stylized. The shading on face suggest she isn't receiving light on her left side yet there is a small patch of light on her left arm and hair. Otherwise nice pic. totally favorited.

Proportions

I like the effects and the feathers, and the shading, but unfortunately the proportions look rather screwed up. Now with that in mind, if it weren't for my complete dislike and hatred towards anime i would have given it a 6/10. One big thing to change is the eye placement. The eyes should be at about the middle of the head. But since you made the eyes a bit high up, they lie where the forehead should be making the head look flat on top. The other problem with the head is that it is shaped funny. The human head is never a triangle.

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Jul 25, 2011
5:53 PM EDT
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