I'm One of them
I am one of them pplz*3*. I think that pencil sketches should not be placed in the regular art portal, but you can still post em in your gallery. Only completed works are ment for the main art portal.
But now time for the real review. The proportions of her upper body are off from her lower body. Also her face frame seems a little off to me. It looks like her head is flat on top. Also the hands seem very boxy lookin to me and need to be rounded There's a couple more things I could say but I'll leave it at that.
Try using mannequins?