Pretty nice.
I like the colors that you used in this. The softness of them creates a nice air. I like how the warm colored orange fire contrasts with the other colors in the drawing, which are almost all cool cool colors.
I like the style in which you drew the hands. It's unique.
The only big problem with this drawing is proportions. The eyes are too far apart and the front forearm is too long.
3/5
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