This was better

Ok so this was better, alot better then your other stuff and with this one you can see you putting in more effort with shades and lighting, the view screen is kinda small so thats another area you may want to work on, so a few things here first the size could be larger, and more stuff like props could be in there, these are a few things that could be better, so put in some more effort and such, other then that it was pretty decent.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The size of the canvus could be much larger, that way you can show more detail and even add more stuff in the drabwing itself.