Few issues...

ok, I really like the way you have applied colours to this image, very bold and sharp... I like the design aspect as well... however I'm going to pull you up on a few things, First of all, lets look at the background, the cross isnt attached to the floor, it really stands out... should have picked that up, 2nd the cross on the church isnt central to the church, *if the building doesnt seem to look angled enough to cope with the cross been there, 3rd the eye design on the back of the coat, the eyelashes things on the left hand side seem to be hovering over the fold of the cloak in a non realistic way, like you put a layer on and forgot about it. 4th i dont know why theres lense flair from behind that gravestone if the main light is coming from the right handside of the screen. 5th the shading is all over the place, i mean, the coat is good, but the horns say its coming from below, the hat says its from above and a final thing to go along with the shading, is that you should really dull down some colours in the darker areas, such as the horns and cross on the hat, they shouldn't be that bright, try looking at metallic objects or referencing to get better metallic looks. this picture is ok, but shows its either rushed or not enough care has gone into it... a fine example of talent but not enough skill applied. 5/10