WOW!
Wow an amazing peice of art from you! :O
the guy on the right looks bit like jacon from Twilight xDD
Niall & Zaran - Kleptomania
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EDIT: Fixed some minor mistakes, including the shading on Niall's arm now. :)
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Here's another one of Zaran and Niall, in one picture this time. XD Full description on DA. TL;DR: Zaran is a kleptomaniac and Niall has to save his ass from getting arrested all the time. :)
I'd appreciate critique. SERIOUS CONSTRUCTIVE crits, please (because I actually want to improve the drawing!). I'll ignore any useless comments (e.g: "That dude looks like a chick." Instead of that, it could have read "He looks female, you could man him up by broadening his jawline). Oh yea, Zaran (the elf) is meant to be a tad gay-looking, btw. He's not supposed to be homosexual, however.
Enjoy! The characters are mine but their stories take place in Bethesda's Oblivion universe.
Clari responds:
Thanks so much! :D
Haha, my mom said that, too. XD
Ahhh,
I think the arm looks fine. Lol Even after clicking the picture to get a fuller view. So the only constructive criticism I have is on the roundness of the noses, it kind of comes off as awkward looking, on Zaran especially. The backdrop of the forest is perfect, a lot of detail work, but not too overcrowded. =) Nice.
Clari responds:
Thank you so much! I love good criticism, so I'll go ahead and work on the noses when I have a chance. :D I actually went and fixed the arm after the other review was posted, so that might be why it looks okay now. Thanks so much for the kind comment!
It's good, however.
My main issue is with the dude's (Zaran?) Arm there, the one hanging down. It looks like you got a little lazy with the shading, it's not as detailed as the rest of the body and the skin tone is way off from the rest of his body. Also, I'm sure you meant it like that, but the hand seems a little thin. It honestly looks like he only has half a middle finger, a pointer, and a thumb on that hand.
Clari responds:
That's Niall, but yea, thanks. :) Someone else pointed that out as well, but the reason it looks like that is because of the texture I used. I could probably have shaded it darker to even it out but the "skin tone change" is definitely from the overlay texture (you could see it better on the full-size image, but NG won't let me upload it). I'll work on it though, thanks!
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