YES

Lucky that you only have 4k words... I bet he could have *bla bla bla* 10k...

Anyways; she has a look on her face that resembles a look that a (rabbit)girls might have when she's given a choice. something like: "What else do you think this *carrot* is for, little pink bunny girl? You know you want the carrot, right? You want it. Take the carror... ".
I know, pretty weird, but that is just the look on her face!
But uhm... i'm VERY VERY upset about the coloring outside the lines, the color of the background and so on. I vote 4 (stars that is...)

For anyone wondering bunnies don't make a noise unless they are being attacked and that disturbingly sounds exactly like a small child screaming.