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Jun 7, 2014 | 5:07 AM EDT
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dave
carl
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Dave & Carl #153 - 'Train'

Ridin' the rails...

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sanford1002sanford1002

Rated 5 / 5 stars

That one was unexpected.


ChazDude responds:

:] :] :}


M0nk3m4nM0nk3m4n

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Pretty funny stuff. I hope you are open to receiving comedic suggestions...
I think a joke like this would have ended up funnier if the punch line had
been entirely visual. Example: Dave asks "Don't you mean IN the train?"
and the next, and final panel is simply Carl riding on top of the train.
It catches one off-guard and being the last panel gives it an extra kick.

Alternately, to keep the "Err...no?" joke, you could add it, Dave could
be saying something along the lines of "I don't understand" in your style,
and then the final panel with Carl on the train, for the same punch line.

You don't have to change this or anything, but it's a good technique to
keep in mind. Hope this comes in handy! :D


ChazDude responds:

I probably shouldn't have made it so obvious...

Thanks for the tip :]


DjambDjamb

Rated 3 / 5 stars

he


ChazDude responds:

haa