Entertaining

I like the "SHADING" on this, would have been cool to see more shading in other entries like you have here, This particular entry of the comic is pretty good, you have a nice humor that you bring to this, I like your ideas here and you made this one a very enjoyble comic, its a greats series and cant wait to see much more of your work but mainly enjoy this comic for what it is.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
would have been cool to see more shading in other entries like you have here

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what brand cigarettes were they going to smoke? :D

Nice. But I think you should fill in the smoke better. It looks like you filled it in as fast as possible, lol. Looks kinda messy.

Just relax...