Brilliant entry

The ending "BOOM" was great A brilliant entry you have here I found this particular entry extra special because you made it that much more "ENTERTAINING" and there was a small adventure with this one, I love how you have the characters "INTERTWINE-WITH-EACHOTHER" and really made this entry work well.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
For sure more color

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LMAO.. Later that evening, Dave's lady friend that he recently set on fire in the shower came over for dinner, Dave placed a delicious looking meal infront of her, he too sitting down across from her and they shared this meal. Halfway through, the lady friend looks up and goes "OMG, Dave, this is amazing, what is it?" ... Dave smiles and says "It's pan roasted carp.. errr... C4 roasted Carl!!" xDD