Cool

This was notbad I thaught it could have some better humor or better longer joke, a fun piece here though it was pretty good though, These are always cool, I love the way that you build up the story and give a good ending just like this one it was entertaining, regardless if its your two wild characters or the potato man guy it always seems to be filled with some adventure.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added humor ofcourse.

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